tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post114888327431682973..comments2023-11-05T01:32:15.203-08:00Comments on Embroider the Silence: Sunday Scribbling - First LoveKim G.http://www.blogger.com/profile/02580039996408082406noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1149055139139587962006-05-30T22:58:00.000-07:002006-05-30T22:58:00.000-07:00ARG! NO! I'm really mad at you right now -- but in...ARG! NO! I'm really mad at you right now -- but in a good way. That completely took me by surprise. Ouch. Well done. Now can I read the version where it's a wedding and they dance and kiss and cry?Laini Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064837312936707024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1149034746541163822006-05-30T17:19:00.000-07:002006-05-30T17:19:00.000-07:00great story! are you and leah partners-in-sunday-s...great story! are you and leah partners-in-sunday-scribblings? you both are coming out with some great stories! <BR/><BR/>-another amberAmber Himeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12342938370035633613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1149018470484577722006-05-30T12:47:00.000-07:002006-05-30T12:47:00.000-07:00What an incredible surprise. And what a wonderful ...What an incredible surprise. And what a wonderful funeral!papyrushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05359470770576197059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148940848700651622006-05-29T15:14:00.000-07:002006-05-29T15:14:00.000-07:00What a surprise twist! So bittersweet, and complet...What a surprise twist! So bittersweet, and completely unexpected.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06524230831950917735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148925251370140552006-05-29T10:54:00.000-07:002006-05-29T10:54:00.000-07:00I didn't see the end coming either. Wow...WHOMP!Th...I didn't see the end coming either. Wow...WHOMP!<BR/><BR/>That was excellent, Kim!Deb Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03322863748665701618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148924373281863042006-05-29T10:39:00.000-07:002006-05-29T10:39:00.000-07:00This just blew me away. I did not see this coming...This just blew me away. I did not see this coming. Your wrote beautifully and eloquently, slipping in the unexpected twist at the end with such delicacy.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148921163717193492006-05-29T09:46:00.000-07:002006-05-29T09:46:00.000-07:00Fun stuff. I enjoyed the M Night Shymalayan twist...Fun stuff. I enjoyed the M Night Shymalayan twist.<BR/><BR/>Good Job!<BR/>Alive HusbandKim G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02580039996408082406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148920771700743642006-05-29T09:39:00.000-07:002006-05-29T09:39:00.000-07:00Oh, wow! You really should write a book. This was ...Oh, wow! You really should write a book. This was so rich with vision, and I totally belived it was a wedding... How sad. But you are a really good writer!<BR/><BR/>:)Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680903854519503303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148918904172034592006-05-29T09:08:00.000-07:002006-05-29T09:08:00.000-07:00This is a perfect story - one that haunts and ling...This is a perfect story - one that haunts and lingers, like a fragrance you catch on the breeze throughout the day.Rebekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06105270971959281644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148915885367104772006-05-29T08:18:00.000-07:002006-05-29T08:18:00.000-07:00The twist here was jarring--but, in a good way. I...The twist here was jarring--but, in a good way. I love your attention to detail...this is something I'm working on in my writing every day!Left-handed Trees...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06057727021295729384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148909004452669322006-05-29T06:23:00.000-07:002006-05-29T06:23:00.000-07:00What a stunning story! It certainly tugged at my ...What a stunning story! It certainly tugged at my heartstrings this morning.Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22470511.post-1148894584097066372006-05-29T02:23:00.000-07:002006-05-29T02:23:00.000-07:00Wow! I was sure she was going to her wedding. What...Wow! I was sure she was going to her wedding. What an unexpected twist! Beautifully written.paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.com